Illustration Fallen Angel

[Baka Taichou]

Was a commission . Character belongs to commissioner
Any opinions?

 

[benelori]

Is the end of the world coming?

 

[Baka Taichou]

might be xD

 

[Gintara]

lol XD

I like the clouds and the wings the most.

 

[benelori]

I would say that maybe the haphazard apocalyptic feeling would've been better transmitted if the red clouds were random...the lines of the clouds sort of converge towards the character, so if those line were random(like the white clouds), then maybe...

Am I making any sense?

 

[Baka Taichou]

not really lol xD I mean I don't get it? XD say it in romanian too? XD

Gintara Thanks I'm glad you do! Those parts were the most painful to color

 

[benelori]

Okay, romanian it is then

Spoiler

Deci(mama n-am scris the mult in romana)...avem nori rosii...liniile norilor rosii converg catre bitchy-inger...cred ca motivul pentru asta e, sa sublinieze caderea, dar mie mi-ar fi placut a abordare mai dezordonata...norile alea sa fie fie mai random intr-un fel, ca si norile albe...
Mi se pare ca liniile norilor(mai exact partile care au rosu inchis in ele) rosii formeaza un V mare, deci exista un fel the ordine

PS: mi-am dat seama ca am tradus doar ce am scris inainte, cu putine adaugari, asa ca...

 

[Baka Taichou]

so in other words the placement of the clouds should have been more chaotic and not so neat? I have the stupid habit of making them neater and neater as I reach the end of the page
Though I think the reason is because when I add in the details I start from the lower part and as I gradually advance I get lazier and lazier XD and always end up rushing to the end xDDD
but yea I was too tired to understand back when I read the english part xD plus the V thing made sense xD

 

[benelori]

so in other words the placement of the clouds should have been more chaotic and not so neat? I have the stupid habit of making them neater and neater as I reach the end of the page
Though I think the reason is because when I add in the details I start from the lower part and as I gradually advance I get lazier and lazier XD and always end up rushing to the end xDDD
but yea I was too tired to understand back when I read the english part xD plus the V thing made sense xD

I see...so only the V thing made sense...and here I was trying to sound complicated and smart...

I dunno...I might be reading into it too much, but the V thing option makes sense as well...it's just a matter of taste I suppose

 

[Baka Taichou]

lol my mind totally went elswhere at the last sentence XDDDDD

and lol I keep saying this but everyone seems to ignore me xD I'M SIMPLEMINDED! XDDD plus it was late and was tired

 

[MysticRavine]

I wish I could have such art talent! I just came on here to post some stuff (Crappy stuff might I add.(I am not an amazing artist.)) I love to look at other people's talent too. I just wanted to say it looks beautiful and I hope that you can sometime draw some manga for my stories. I am a better writer than artist unfortunetly. I would love to do my own art but alas I lack the skill. Maybe we can chat sometime about making some manga.