Showoff My first drawing video

[Ryuxx]

Any pros here who are experienced on drawing videos that can give this noob some tips ?

 

[Kappa]

I am not a pro by any means, but I have seen a lot of professional drawing videos. From what I can see, most obvious tip would be not skipping the construction steps. Draw lightly with a mechanical pen before you use ink. I can't see any construction lines on yours, although that might be because of the video brightness.