Feedback Writing Manga 2 - New Idea

[Ligtnin]

Hi again out there

After I posted my first idea I got some good reasons why not to write it, so I got a new idea. So tell me what you think.

I don't have a name for it yet, but I will think of something.

The story is about an assassin who is the best in the city. he can use any weapon from the middle ages. The problem is: He lives in the 21st century so he has to move with the shadows and find new creative ideas to kill his target.
He doesn't like his job but it's what he do, it's his only talent.

And I know there question will come: Why did he turn in to be an assassin if he dosn't like it. But that's something that later in the story will be explained.

So what do you guys think?

 

[BlueWolfCreator]

well where is the plot to the story? and what kind of manga is it?, action,comedy i don't really see much in it, its missing alot tho its pretty creative in terms of originality.

 

[Farfalla]

That's the concept, he asked for thoughts about the concept itself.

 

[Akisume]

It's a good concept, but...if want to know if the idea is good, some plot details are more helpful. <3